Amber [Lieutenant]

[Amber]

OOC Name: Amber
Character Name: Amber
Link to bio: clicky
Desired Position: Lieutenant

[Administrator]

Nadseni is being attacked by the Order of Chaos. From a safe distance away, you can see the flames of desperate followers attempting to counter the enemy soldiers. The leader of your Order is on business elsewhere, and as the only lieutenant nearby, you must make a quick decision as to how to defend the village.

[Amber]

A woman dressed in dark clothing lurked in the shadows of the forest. She kept her head down, her blonde hair covering her face. The young Lieutenant could sense fear and chaos down in the village of Nadseni. It wasn't just any chaos though, it was the Order of Chaos. Amber let out a sort of growl, some people would find it odd, but there are even odder things about this girl than anyone could imagine. With a long, hard history she could take just about anything, she was unpredictable. Amber lengthened her stride until she reached the edge of the forest. Looking down on the village, she took in what was happening.

The first thing she caught sight of was one of the Chaos Lieutenants. It was Arashi. Oh, how she loathed him. He seemed to be the only hierarchy there and the leader of the battle. Order of Flame Followers were using their power to the best of their ability. They seemed stronger than usual, Amber guessed it was their determination and because of the sun's heat. She only saw male Followers fighting back so she assumed that the females were escaping with the children. Amber thought out a quick plan as she slid down the hill to one of the allies between two shops. She put her back against the wall and side-stepped, staying in the shadows. When she reached a barrel of who knows what, she climbed ontop of it then leaped onto the roof of the other shop. Crawling, she laid on her stomach, observing the ongoing war. Five Followers were surrounding Arashi. They came at him one at a time. Ugh! No! Just blow some ashes in his face to distract him! she thought to herself I could use that... Amber grinned and rethought her plan. After the last of the five Followers were flung off, Amber sprung off the roof in one swift move. She flipped in the air and then shot her legs straight out and hit Arashi in the chest and sent him flying into the fruit cart behind him. He quickly pulled himself together and got up. Some of the other Order of the Chaos were about to take a blow at her but Arashi held his hand up. It was now a one-on-one battle between him and Amber.

Amber took up a stable stance and spread her legs a part slightly and bent her knees, placing them slightly outward. She put her hands up in front of her, but not in fists. She stuck both index fingers out with her middle finger pressed up against it. Arashi gave her a cold stare and then started to circle her. Amber did a back hand spring and landed on her feet. She quickly took the position of one foot firmly on the ground with the other pointing outward and her arms looking like she was about to shoot an arrow. Nimbly, she circled her right arm around and threw a blow of fire at Arashi. She knew he was expecting her to use her knowledge of pressure points and paralyze him but she did the opposite. A Chaos Follower leapt in the way of her fire and burned to ashes. She blinked, truely taken aback by such a bold move. Amber narrowed her eyes and cartwheeled over to the crumpled heap of a Lieutenant. She swiped at his arms and legs, disabling his nervous system. He groaned in dismay, he was paralyzed for now, and she didn't feel like killing another person today. The guilt of murdering the Chaos Follower was starting to devour her. But she reminded herself that it wasn't her own fault. Amber looked all around her, flame seemed to be consuming the darkness of the Order of Chaos. The Order of the Flame was once again, dominating their rivals. Amber smirked then looked down at Arashi and blew some ashes at him, she cackled, showing no mercy.

[Administrator]

Your audition looks good Elk/Amber =3

Just a couple of things to point out as this is an audition and not just a rp sample or something. They're nothing major, just little things.

"Amber let out a sort of growl, some people would find it odd but there are even odder things about this girl than you could imagine." -- This sentence is just a little awkward and the use of you is kind of weird, this should probably be two sentences

Other than that, at the end I'm a little confused at how Arashi died. Did he get hit by the fire too but the follower took the full force of the magic? It's just a little confusing how it's worded.

Overall, really good audition ^^ Amber will be a wonderful lieutenant for the Order of Flame!

[Amber]

Fixed :3